Enjoying it so far, though I have some issues with the style. I'm all for experimentation, but I really want the POV character to stay locked, or I end up getting taken out of the story while I try to figure out whose head I'm meant to be in.

I also assumed that the references to fascism would be metaphorical, not an actual malignant force that comes out of the walls...

Still, early days though, and it's good enough that my morning commute flies by.